Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Chapter 22 “Control” (2 of 11) (Pages 146 – 155)

This is the 2nd of what will be eleven ‘chapters’ under the title of ‘Control’ – the first was just two chapters earlier (Chapter 20). Repetition is a key part of persuasion, and Crichton understands that he must persuade the reader that the technology and scenario he is laying out to them are very much possible.

Best Writing, Quotes

“We see these animals as fragile and delicate.”

Jurassic Park, Page 151 Arnold to Malcolm

The scientists who have resurrected the dinosaurs and built the park are finding exactly what they plan to find – a novel, near-natural, ecosystem that doesn’t violate any of their safety designs. Malcolm sees the park for what it really is – a living Frankenstein ecosystem, cobbled together with parts that will lead to unintended consequences.

Page by Page Highlights, Quotes

“Grant didn’t like computers.” Page 146

“That’s two hundred and thirty-eight animals, as of this minute.” John Arnold to Genaro, Page 147.

“Once every fifteen minutes, the computer tallies the animals in all categories,” Arnold said. Page 148. The category tally is a technical report, a data table, that Crichton will use very persuasively with the reader later in the book.

“It’s important for everyone to remember that these animals are created.” Page 149 – Arnold refers to the ‘version numbers’ of the dinosaurs in the category tally.

“And these sensors are everywhere in the park?” Page 150 Arnold agrees to Malcolm’s question, stating that “92%” of the park is covered. It is amazing to think that today, thirty-four years later, even the most ardent technophile would laugh at the assertion that such a system could reliably function with a 0% failure rate.

“We see these animals as fragile and delicate.” Arnold to Malcolm, Page 151

“You’re going to have rides? Like an amusement park?” Grant realizes the plan on page 152.

“This is the system Mr. Nedry designed?” Malcolm asked. Page 153

“It’s just a matter of your assumptions.” Malcolm answers the question of, “Can any dinosaurs escape?” on page 154.

“I’m sure the tour will make everything clear,” Malcolm said. Page 155

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Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Chapter 21 “Version 4.4” (Pages 140 – 146)

These aren’t real dinosaurs – we know that through Crichton’s detailed explanation of how they were made technically feasible. We’ve looked at old DNA that has deteriorated, we’ve patched that DNA with other animals – frogs, birds, and reptiles, and then we’ve brought them into the world with synthetic eggs. These are simulacrum of dinosaurs that we’re blind to because the differentiated steps are done behind the scenes with science, and with enormous numbers that make it hard to understand how different the new animals are.

At the same time the reader expects real dinosaurs, probably 20% of the book to this point has been showing us that obviously they are not. In the same way a great magician can describe the way a trick was done, and still we believe the trick – Crichton has shown us what are clear ‘not-dinosaurs’ and still we are focused on these creatures because they are dinosaurs. This topic is explored in greater depth in the book and movie sequels.

Best Writing, Quotes

“I see no reason to improve upon reality.”

Jurassic Park, Page 146 Hammond to Wu

Hammond is trope-blind, he can’t see how his own internal logic is inconsistent. He is improving upon reality by bringing dinosaurs to life, but is not willing to do the extra work to ensure that the dinosaurs will be safe for the world to observe them.

Page by Page Highlights, Quotes

“We should go to Version 4.4” Wu says to Hammond on Page 146, implying that all the animals should be terminated and upgraded. Wu knows they have problems.

“And entertainment has nothing to do with reality. Entertainment is antithetical to reality.” Wu to Hammond on Page 147

  • The dinosaurs are too fast, they are ‘too real.’
  • Are these even real dinosaurs?
  • Wu argues that the guests will not like the visual conflict of large animals moving so fast.
  • The reader knows that the speed of the dinosaurs will make the park impossible.
  • Wu even labels the next version as ‘domesticated dinosaurs.’

“The DNA of the dinosaurs was like old photographs that had been retouched, basically the same as the original but in some places repaired and clarified, and as a result – ” Wu thinks of the issues with the dinosaurs, Page 142

“We’ve got a whole army of devices now – and they’re all too slow.” Wu, Page 143

“If you want to get something done, stay out of universities.” Page 144, Hammond’s guidance to Wu in a flashback after Atherton’s death

“And the work itself had shifted – it wasn’t even reptilian cloning, once they began to understand that dinosaurs were so similar to birds.” Page 145

“I see no reason to improve upon reality.” Page 146 Hammond to Wu

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Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Chapter 20 “Control [1/11]” (Pages 129 – 140)

Crichton doesn’t formally call his chapters ‘chapters’ in the same way he calls his ‘sections’ ‘iterations’ – Chapter 20 is the first of eleven chapters that have the word ‘Control’ as the title, ten of them have the title solely as ‘Control’. Crichton uses every word to immerse his reader in the book and to help them follow the action.

Just as in ‘West World’ this theme park has a central area to observe the park, and its only logical that this be a great set piece for the reader to experience the story as it unravels. Crichton uses the word ‘control’ in several contexts:

  • “The control room is built to do exactly that.” Page 131
  • “First, the control procedures, our animals are counted by computer every few minutes.” Page 131 – this foreshadows one of the bigger reversals of this ‘computer counting approach’ in a later chapter.

Best Writing, Quotes

“He finally decided that children liked dinosaurs because these giant creatures personified the uncontrollable force of looming authority.”

Jurassic Park, Page 134, Dr. Grant

Crichton’s writing is satisfyingly stuffed with facts, data, and insight – this chapter is full of it. We get more examples of the Famous, Famous, Fictional trope. Tim, the grandson, has read Alan Grant’s book – this is an intra-literary epistle read by a character to establish credibility. In a flashback we see Nedry deduce that his software specs must be written around DNA, as that is the only field with such great demand for data.

The facts always arrive right on time to save the day, which is why Ian Malcolm’s skeptical world view works so well. All it takes is for one fact to not arrive and all the plans for the park will collapse. If the dinosaurs can’t breed, then it is clear they can be contained – if they can breed, then there is a much greater security requirement.

Page by Page Highlights, Quotes

“He smiled, “at one time, I thought I had more than twenty species. But now only fifteen.” – Page 129, Dr. Wu responds to Ian Malcolm’s questions

“And in the sixty million years since dinosaurs disappeared, apparently the bacteria that specialize in breaking down their feces disappeared, too.” – Page 130, Dr. Wu

“First, the control procedures: our animals are counted by computer every few minutes.” – Dr. Wu, Page 131

“One of the things the island doesn’t have is a good harbor, or even a good dock.” Page 132, Ed Regis

  • Regis, despite being a key character in the novel, is not in the movie.
  • A Reddit thread highlights that he was given many of Gennaro’s traits from the book.

“The velociraptors haven’t been integrated into the park setting just yet.” – page 133, Ed Regis

“He finally decided that children liked dinosaurs because these giant creatures personified the uncontrollable force of looming authority.” Page 134, Dr. Grant

“They can’t need all this just for a resort,” Malcolm said.” – Page 135 – More foreshadowing as the power is needed to keep the electric fences running to contain the dinosaurs.

“Only then did the animal attack, leaping up to strike the fence at chest level.” Page 136 – One raptor created a distraction, two attacked, then a third attacker waited for the rebound to test the strength of the electric fence.

“From beginning to end the entire attack could not have taken more than six seconds.” – Page 137

“It’s actually rather close to what paleontologists believed a long time ago.” – Page 138, Dr. Grant

“So I wonder: have they learned, somewhere along the line, that humans are easy to kill?” – Page 139, Malcolm to Grant.

“In any case,” Malcolm said, “I shall be extremely interested to see the control room now.” – Page 140, Ian Malcolm

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Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Chapter 19 “The Tour” (Pages 108 – 129)

At 21 pages “The Tour” is the longest chapter so far and the 2nd longest chapter in the book – and it sits within ‘Third Iteration’ – the longest of the seven segments within the book. We closed Chapter 18 with Crichton’s last major ‘tension escalator’ being revealed – Hammond is so sure of the park’s safety that he has brought his grandchildren along so that they can escape the distractions of their parent’s divorce. We continue the discussion around the children to start the chapter, and ultimately conclude watching a young velociraptor emerge from its shell.

Best Writing, Quotes

“And as for them all being female,” Malcolm said, “is that checked? Does anyone go out and, ah, lift up the dinosaurs’ skirts to have a look?”

Jurassic Park, Page 127 – Ian Malcolm

Crichton’s writing is satisfyingly stuffed with facts, data, and insight – this chapter is full of it. We get more examples of the Famous, Famous, Fictional trope. Tim, the grandson, has read Alan Grant’s book – this is an intra-literary epistle read by a character to establish credibility. In a flashback we see Nedry deduce that his software specs must be written around DNA, as that is the only field with such great demand for data.

The facts always arrive right on time to save the day, which is why Ian Malcolm’s skeptical world view works so well. All it takes is for one fact to not arrive and all the plans for the park will collapse. If the dinosaurs can’t breed, then it is clear they can be contained – if they can breed, then there is a much greater security requirement.

Page by Page Highlights, Quotes

“And the other adults, standing behind, looked embarrassed and uncomfortable.” Page 108 – Tim Murphy is written in the first person. We’ve only just met him, we’ve not been given his or his sister’s ages.

The Lost World of the Dinosaurs,” Tim said. Page 109 – The young grandchild of Hammond represents the young dinosaur nerd, and he not only knows who Dr. Grant is, he has a copy of his book. Further, that book title will go on to become an addition to the Jurassic Park naming. Crichton is giving us a book within a book, which then turns out to be used to represent his story in real life.

“Tyrannosaurs should only have thirty-seven vertebrae in the tail.” Page 110 Tim, at age 11, is telling the story of his last trip to the museum of Natural History and how his father does not encourage his scientific interests.

“Was it 5027?” Page 111 – Grant knows the specific dinosaur with the extra vertebrae and commiserates that its’ correction is long over due. Following the Famous, Famous, Fictional trope – 5027 is a real Tyrannosaurus rex specimen.

“My mom said it was just a resort, you know, with swimming and tennis.” – Tim to Grant, page 112

“Halfway down the corridor they came to a glass partition marked with another sign: ” Page 113 – below is an image of biological hazard warning

“The man on the left is our chief engineer, John [Ray] Arnold” – Regis pointed to a thin man in a button-down short-sleeve shirt and tie, smoking a cigarette – “and next to him, our park warden, Mr. Robert Muldoon, the famous white hunter from Nairobi.” Page 114 – We meet two iconic characters from the film, and also ask ourselves – were there really ‘iconic white hunters from Nairobi’ in 1990?

“As you can imagine, a twenty percent yield is insufficient for our work…. And we get it here.” He held up one of hte yellow stones. “From amber- the fossilized resin of prehistoric tree sap.” – Dr. Wu on Page 115

“I’ll be damned – that just might work.” Page 116, Dr. Grant

“How we identify the DNA we have extracted. For that, we use powerful computers.” – Page 116, Dr. Wu.

“The full DNA molecule contains three billion of those bases. If we looked at a screen like this once a second for eight hours a day, it’d still take more than two years to look at the entire DNA strand. It’s that big.” – Page 117, Dr. Wu

“So the first thing we have to do is repair it – or rather, the computer has to.” Page 118, Dr. Wu

“It’s a little bit like putting a puzzle together. The computer can do it very rapidly.” Page 119, Dr. Wu

“Dennis Nedry yawned. He’d long ago concluded that InGen must be doing something like this.” Page 120

“Well, my guess is they’re doing something with DNA,” Barney said. Page 121 – in a flashback we see Nedry interpret the team’s focus before they told him their goal

“Helotoxins, colchicinoids, beta-alkaloids, he said, pointing to a series o fsyringes set out under the UV light. “Kill any living animal within a second or two.” Page 122

“Reptile eggs contain large amounts of yolk but no water at all. The embryos must extract water from the surrounding environment. Hence the mist.” Page 123

“Dinosaurs mature rapidly, attaining full size in two to four years.” Page 124, Dr. Wu.

“It cocked its head to one side and peered at the visitors staring down at it.” Page 125 – the readers meet a baby velociraptor

“All the animals in Jurassic Park are female,” Wu said, with a pleased smile. Page 126

“And as for them all being female,” Malcolm said, “is that checked? Does anyone go out and, ah, lift up the dinosaurs’ skirts to have a look?” Page 127

“The little velociraptor opened her jaws and hissed at Grant in a posture of sudden intense fury.” Page 128

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Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Chapter 18 “When Dinosaurs Ruled the Earth” (Pages 102 – 108) Is it safe?

Safety in a corporate setting is a complex topic. Is the product safe? Are workers safe? How is safety defined? At what cost have we removed too much risk and the product cannot be produced at a reasonable price? In what scenarios can a business rep and warrant a product can be safely used?

Safety is an ever present conversation in corporate culture, meetings, and reports – but it is a unique topic in literature. It is a unique segue chosen by Crichton to broach this plot. The group has been assembled to evaluate the safety of an inherently unsafe idea. The idea is so unsafe that the Ian Malcolm character seems to exist to repeat to the reader over and over, “there is no way this can ever be safe.” Malcolm may use sophisticated mathematics as his language, but he was a one professor Greek chorus repeating about the risks the group is about to encounter.

Gennaro (the character who is killed on a toilet by a Tyrannasaurus rex in the movie) talks to the group assembled in the ‘visitor building’ on the island. Picture a room that should be found at Disney’s EPCOT – but the topic is instead the children attacked by dinosaurs in the pages of First Iteration.

Best Writing, Quotes

“Is it safe for visitors, and is it safely containing the dinosaurs?”

Gennaro to the group, Page 103

This is a sincere question that anyone who has encountered a corporate board meeting can picture being asked. The best lawyers retain other lawyers who go on a fact-finding mission, with an expectation of a ‘Findings Memo’ to be written after the fact. Crichton is piling deadlines on top of deadlines, and intrigue on top of intrigue. Hammond must launch the park, Grant must secure more funding for his digs. InGen is crazy, but Biosyn is crazier. Nobody should trust big IT projects, but a crooked IT consultant will break any project.

How can anything ever be safe in a world with this much confusion and chaos?

Page by Page Highlights, Quotes

“There was a small auditorium dominated by a robot Tyrannosaurus rex, poised mancingly by the entrance to an exhibit area labeled WHEN DINOSAURS RULED THE EARTH.” – Page 102

“Is it safe for visitors, and is it safely containing the dinosaurs?” Gennaro to the group, Page 103

“I direct your attention to two features of this graph,” Gennaro said. – Page 104. Crichton uses graphs and visuals in his story telling.

“That is characteristic of many complex systems.” Malcolm to Gennaro on Page 105 as he interprets the graph.

“Such isolation is impossible,” Malcolm said flatly. “It simply cannot be done.” Page 106 – Malcolm points out that the park is more akin to a ‘spaceship on Earth’ than it is to a zoo.

“This is a safe place,” Hammond said, “no matter what that damn mathematician is saying -” Page 107, Gennaro gets upset as he realizes Hammond’s grandchildren have come to join them on their safety audit.

“Their parents are getting a divorce and I want them to have a fun weekend here.” Page 108 – Hammond justifies the children joining them.

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Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Chapter 17 “Jurassic Park” (Pages 97 – 102) – A Deadly Fictional Fern

“Third Iteration” begins with another Ian Malcolm quote – “Details emerge more clearly as the fractal curve is redrawn.” Given Crichton’s tendency towards dry humor, is he mocking the arrogance of what would become a central character in the movie? Is this vapid statement hinting that while Ian Malcolm predicts the parks downfall, even he too is full of nonsense?

The characters begin to enter the park, they become aware of the lodge, and they start to discern differences between what they were told the park would be and what it is – mostly in that there are extra protective measures. Second Iteration ended with the team landing and beginning to move towards the heart of the park on the island – this first chapter has the reader experience the characters awe at what they’re observing and continue to move physically into the park.

It closes by saying that their tour will start in twenty minutes.

Best Writing, Quotes

“But if planting deadly ferns at poolside was any indication, then it was clear that the designers of Jurassic Park had not been as careful as they should have been.”

Page 100, Ellie notes that the plants – well known to mankind – planted by the pools could kill a child

Ellie observes a lethal plant that lines the edges of the pool – the plant is imaginary, it is on Wikipedia’s ‘List of Fictional Plants‘ along with Audrey II from ‘Little Shop of Horrors.’ Crichton is making his point again – humans cannot possibly anticipate the dangers of their new technology if they can’t even understand the dangers of a plant.

Page by Page Highlights, Quotes

“Everywhere, extensive and elaborate planting emphasized the feeling that they were entering a new world, a prehistoric tropical world, and leaving the normal world behind.” – Page 97

Crichton is always drawing the reader in by telling the reader how the characters are being drawn in.

“It changes everything,” he [Grant] said. Page 97

“The warm-blooded controversy had raged for fifteen years, before a new perception of dinosaurs as quick-moving, active animals was accepted – but not without lasting animosities.” Page 98


“Everybody knows its coming, but not so soon.” Page 99

“These are authentic Jurassic ferns, of course.” Ed Regis, Page 99 – lists the scientific name, Serenna veriformans.

“But if planting deadly ferns at poolside was any indication, then it was clear that the designers of Jurassic Park had not been as careful as they should have been.” Page 100, Ellie notes that the plants – well known to mankind – planted by the pools could kill a child.

“He had seen the plans for the lodge, and he didn’t remember bars on the skylight. In fact, these bars appeared to be a rather crude addition.” – Page 101, Grant observes the additions

“It looks to me like they’ve turned this place into a fortress.” – Ellie, page 102

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Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Second Section, “Second Iteration” (Pages 32 – 93) Chapters 6 – 16

The first section, “First Iteration” is all set up, all creating tension and realism. Little dinosaurs have escaped and we follow a girl who is attacked. We see that there are global stakes to dinosaurs existing and being introduced to the world. We meet no major characters, all we learn about is how this fantastical situation could actually occur, how it could actually come to be real. Re-reading the book now, 35 years later with multiple movies now in the public consciousness, the narrative begins in earnest here in the second iteration.

“Second Iteration” brings us into the world in more detail, and serves as a transfer to the rest of the book. We exit this section 20% of the way through the book and will remain on the island until closing. One fifth of the text has been bringing the characters to the event and establishing that this is a real place with real consequences not just for the characters, but for the world. Crichton’s goals in this chapter appear to be:

  • Create a sense of danger.
  • Create a sense of feasibility of technical plausibility.
  • Build the character list, the people through whom we will experience the plot.
  • Build the list of risks.
  • Get them to the set piece, the island.

Locations

  • Grant’s paleontology dig site, where he is sponsored by Hammond.
  • Corporate offices – those of law offices, competitors, etc.
  • Travel to the island – plane, helicopter, etc.

Why Re-Evaluate Jurassic Park?

  • Financial impact
  • Popularization and capitalistic capture of ‘Dinosaurs’
  • Warnings of technology use
  • Warnings of danger in technology
  • ‘Systems’ level evaluation of society

Crichton Writing Techniques

  • World-building is big and up front.
  • Risk-piling to create tension and pacing.
  • Trope use – ‘Real, real, fake’ (link); ‘Avengers Assemble’; etc.
  • Technical concept introduction; mass popularization.
  • Personal consequences to scenarios with global importance.
  • He reveals his method as he writes – “it wasn’t a real island” – and yet, the island is a real character with essential realistic characteristics that are vital to the plot. Isla Nublar must be plausible to be visited, and simultaneously remote to come into existence.
  • Cast-building, character development – we’re meeting the characters early so that we know their motivations when we encounter them later in the book.

Chapter 6 “Shore of the Inland Sea” (Pages 35 – 48)

Paleontologist Alan Grant, his assistant Ellie Satler, and Jeff Goldblum’s iconic character Ian Malcolm all enter the scene. Malcolm is the source for the quotes on all of the ‘Iteration’ cover pages, and in chapter six he is referenced in the story for the first time – although we don’t yet meet him.

“The modern world was changing fast, and urgent questions about the weather, deforestation, global warming, or the ozone layer often seemed unanswerable, at least in part, with information from the past.”

Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park, Page 35

Chapter 7 “Skeleton” (Pages 48 – 56)

Chapter 6, the first chapter of Iteration 2 introduces us to the team, and now Crichton takes us into the plot. There are dinosaurs because of a shady company, InGen. InGen has a plan to launch a Jurassic Park to show people dinosaurs, and now we’re getting the main characters to the island. While the book is written 22 years before the 2012 release of Marvel’s The Avengers, Crichton is following the trope of, ‘Avengers Assemble’.

“I’ll tell you frankly, Dr. Grant, I’m having a little problem about this island.”

Dr. John Hammond in Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park, Page 55

Chapter 8 “Cowan, Swain and Ross” (Pages 57 – 59)

The book’s Introduction is a pseudo-epistle of a legal memo, Chapter 8 brings us back to the lawyer’s office where we hear counsel discuss their client, Ingen and their plans for Jurassic Park. Counsel will be sending an attendee along with the audit that is bringing Alan Grant and Ian Malcolm to the island.

A common author method is to introduce a major character, or major plot point, in a belittling, condescending way. Nedry brings down the park while attempting to steal dinosaur DNA in camouflaged shaving cream cannisters. His faulty designs are at the heart of the chaos that Ian Malcolm predicts will emerge from this effort. His designs are faulty because he’s the low bidder – because his requests for more funding are denied, Ingen drives him to sell their secrets.

Nedry – an obvious anagram for ‘N E R D Y’ – is obviously not a ‘just’ anything. He’s the lynchpin for Crichton’s warnings about technology and the heart of multiple plot mechanisms that lead to the horrors on Isla Nubar. However, neither Crichton nor the movie directors attempt to make him sympathetic – he’s simply a cog in the wheel of a machine, and the readers can immediately tell that this is the cog that will fail.

“Just a technical person: the computer system analyst [Nedry].  Review the park’s computers and fix some bugs.”

Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park, Page 58

Chapter 9 “Plans” (Pages 59 – 66)

Chapter 9 returns us to Alan Grant’s velociraptor excavation site where he is provided information about Isla Nubar that lacks any context or clarity. He imagines the velociraptor they excavate as a living organism, hunting in packs and deadly to all. Humorously, he explains that they are likely pack animals and wonders if they will be led by an alpha male. Ingen, we learn later, has engineered all of their animals to be female to control the population.

“The cover was marked: ISLA NUBLAR RESORT GUEST FACILITIES (FULL SET: SAFARI, LODGE).”

Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park, Page 59

This book is full of epistles, and this is a great example – it is referenced, but not part of the text. Also, Grant has no context for the document, it is simply a set of plans. How can Grant be any use auditing a site about which he knows nothing? It is also a lesson in human conceptualization and imagination – this idea is so foreign, how could anyone possibly imagine what InGen is doing, if one of their ‘trusted experts’ is himself totally unfamiliar with their plans?

How could anyone expect such activity to be safe, or to be vetted for ‘safety’ – if nobody outside of the set of people who profit from the idea – are even able to conceptualize what they’re attempting to do?

Chapter 10 “Hammond” (Pages 67 – 72) Meet the Miniature Marketing Elephant

We’ve met Hammond three chapters earlier, and his surname will also serve as the title of Chapter 56 in the ‘7th Iteration’ towards the close of the book. Donald Gennaro, who works for InGen’s counsel, prepares to skip his daughter’s birthday party to join the emergency ‘safety audit’ of the park and is debriefed by John Hammond about what to expect. The chapter takes place in the InGen offices and on the flight to Choteau.

Crichton has an elaborate and thorough back story for InGen, the funds they’ve raised, the holes in their business plan, and the deceptive practices used to procure funding. Hammond uses a miniature elephant (a miniature dinosaur is used in a similar fashion as an homage to Crichton by Zebrowski in 1994’s The Killing Star) as a marketing tool. Crichton bombards the reader with specifics to make the story real from the get go. Behind every fact lies pages of documentation. Every turn of the car leads to a boulevard, we find no dead-ends, no cul-de-sacs.

The reader is still in the ‘team-building’ phase of the book, the trope we’re following is “Avengers Assemble.

“Hammond also concealed from prospective investors the fact that the elephant’s behavior had changed substantially in the process of miniaturization.”

Crichton’s Jurassic Park Page 69

Investors assume that because it looks like an elephant, that it acts like an elephant, which Hammond doesn’t correct. Hammond allows a lie of omission – one of at least three that Crichton uses to show his slippery behavior. However, by changing the form of the beast, the animals temperament is also different.

Chapter 11 “Choteau” (Pages 72 – 73) Patronage and Science

Dr. Grant and Dr. Ellie Satler wait for John Hammond’s jet and then join him to travel to Costa Rica with a stop off in Dallas. Hammond claims the trip will be short and simple.

“Although many fields of science, such as physics and chemistry, had become federally funded, paleontology remained strongly dependent on private patrons. Quite apart from his own curiosity abou the island in Costa Rica, Grant understood that, if John Hammond asked for his help, he would give it. That was how patronage wroked – how it had alwasy worked.”

Crichton’s Jurassic Park Page 69

The reason this book is worth re-evaluating from a literature and societal impact is not because it is a successful movie franchise about dinosaurs – it is because it best exemplifies concerns about technology that are present in all of Crichton’s works. Crichton’s description of patronage, through the eyes of the character who becomes the franchise protagonist shows how aware he is of; (i) the corrupting influence of federal investment, and (ii) the quid pro quo that scientists know they must participate in in order to be successful.

Chapter 12 “Target of Opportunity” (Pages 74 – 78) Corporate Competition from Biosyn, Nedry’s Employer

Companies almost never call emergency board meetings – the game of business occurs between board meetings. Board meetings are the whistle at the end of the quarter, or to close out the game and move to the next phase of a season. We find a sketchy geneticist, Lewis Dodgson, who has hired Nedry – the mole inside Jurassic Park. Crichton uses competitive intelligence to tell us more about InGen, rather than continuing with exposition.

From the outset, the reader has thought, “who are these madmen at InGen pursuing such a reckless plan?”

Here, Crichton shows us that they are relatively moderate compared to their competitors down the road. In fact, in a world without Biosyn, we never get the pending shutdown of the island’s IT systems which leads to the catastrophic failure. Were it not for corporate shenanigans, perhaps we create a universe where the park is peaceful and dinosaurs become a slow, incremental part of an alternate reality.

“What they have done,” Dodgson said, “is build the greatest single tourist attraction in the history of the world. … And then there is the merchandising. [Italics are Crichton’s.] The picture books, T-shirts, video games, caps, stuffed toys, comic books, and pets.” –

Crichton’s Jurassic Park Page 77

If Crichton was genre-blind to what he was creating with this book, he certainly was able to see the future with this quote. The franchise has brought in over $7 billion across movies, merchandise, video games and more.

Chapter 13 “Airport” (Pages 79 – 81) Biosyn, Dodgson & Nedry

Biosyn, the corporate nemesis to InGen, hangs around for at least one more chapter. So much of the modern franchise depicts the ‘evils of InGen’ and follows derivative corporate greed with future movies talking about weaponizing dinosaurs, world-devouring-locusts, etc. – that the fact that the primary plot device created in the first Jurassic Park comes from one company paying another company’s employee to sabotage their primary asset.

If you’re in a competitive supply chain – even if you are acting rationally, it takes only one aggressive, evil, and/or dimwitted opponent to turn things upside down.

“Also, Dodgson said “we think the island maintains constant radio contact with InGen corporate headquarters in California, so –”

Dodgson to Nedry, Page 81 from Crichton’s Jurassic Park

Here, Crichton has created another reason for the big power outage that kicks off the movie franchise. When this is written about today, so much of the debate goes to ‘system failures’ and other problems – but really this all kicks off with corporate-to-corporate capitalistic greed.

Chapter 14 “Malcolm” (Pages 82 – 87) Ian Malcolm, Chaos Theory & The Butterfly Effect

We first meet Ian Malcolm – the character Jeff Goldblum would make famous – on page 33, where he is quoted as the bridge between chapters. Here we find an entire chapter in his name.

“Chaos theory originally grew out of attempts to make computer models of weather in the 1960s.”

Page 85 – Ian explains his field of mathematics to Gennaro from Crichton’s Jurassic Park

In this one chapter, Ian Malcolm introduces two topics common in modern society: Chaos Theory and The Butterfly Effect. This is a disaster movie flashing multiple points of failure in its opening chapters. Biosyn and Dodgson are bribing an IT employee. The animals are dangerous. Even if they weren’t, Malcolm’s mathematics serve as another oracle to tell the reader “Danger Ahead!”

Chapter 15 “Isla Nublar” (Pages 87 – 90) – Crichton’s Narnia

In the same way Crichton creates tension by layering tension on top of tension – he creates his origin in Jurassic Park by layering origin on origin on origin. The dinosaurs are born from novel eggs, found from DNA in amber. The characters are assembled. And then we follow them to a ‘magic island‘ – Isla Nublar, which is now as popular a fantasy setting as Brigadoon and Narnia.

“Isla Nublar, Hammond explained, was not a true island.”

Page 88 – Crichton introduces his ‘real’ island by immediately stating that it isn’t real

The whole chapter sets the scene – beginning with a foggy entrance by helicopter and closing with our protagonists seeing the long neck of a sauropod emerge from a forest of palm trees. Isla Nublar is a magical place where humanity can invent dinosaurs. Crichton throws his best descriptions at the island as it makes the entire book possible.

The setting accomplishes many things:

  • Closest enough to the US to be a tourist destination.
  • Large natural mountains to serve as a ‘zoo’ and keep the animals in.
  • Close enough to have world class technology, but far enough to be done in total secret.

Chapter 16 “Welcome” (Pages 91 – 93) – The Best Book Name Ever?

“Welcome to Jurassic Park.”

Are we being welcomed to the island? To the park? To the book that we’re already over 90 pages in to? It’s all of it. Crichton has arguably taken an obvious book idea – dinosaurs alive today – and introduced it in a way to make it immensely readable, immensely stick to the reader. It all starts with the great name, used for the great idea – a theme park, and then he had the wisdom to put it on the book’s cover.

“He hoped to God the island was safe.”

Page 91, Gennaro thinks about money first, safety last

Is Gennaro the bad guy? Is the book a tale about the evils of science, the evils of sponsored R&D, or the evils of capitalism? Is it a warning about all of it? Yes, yes, and yes. The movies give us the spectacular vision of Gennaro (imdb) later abandoning the kids alone in a vehicle to be eaten by a Tyrannosaurus rex, only to be eaten by the same dinosaur while sitting on a toilet.

Isn’t this a warning about all activities? Shouldn’t safety, for all those involved, for all those who could be impacted – be considered first, not as an after thought?

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Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Chapter 16 “Welcome” (Pages 91 – 93) – The Best Book Name Ever?

“Welcome to Jurassic Park.”

Are we being welcomed to the island? To the park? To the book that we’re already over 90 pages in to? It’s all of it. Crichton has arguably taken an obvious book idea – dinosaurs alive today – and introduced it in a way to make it immensely readable, immensely stick to the reader. It all starts with the great name, used for the great idea – a theme park, and then he had the wisdom to put it on the book’s cover.

Best Writing, Quotes

“He hoped to God the island was safe.”

Page 91, Gennaro thinks about money first, safety last

Is Gennaro the bad guy? Is the book a tale about the evils of science, the evils of sponsored R&D, or the evils of capitalism? Is it a warning about all of it? Yes, yes, and yes. The movies give us the spectacular vision of Gennaro (imdb) later abandoning the kids alone in a vehicle to be eaten by a Tyrannosaurus rex, only to be eaten by the same dinosaur while sitting on a toilet.

Isn’t this a warning about all activities? Shouldn’t safety, for all those involved, for all those who could be impacted – be considered first, not as an after thought?

Page by Page Highlights, Quotes

“He hoped to God the island was safe.” – Page 91, Genarro thinks about money first, safety last.

“Although this animal was clearly not in the water, it was moving much too quickly, the head and neck shifting above the palms in a very active manner — a surprisingly active manner –.” Page 92

  • Crichton uses multiple emdashes, in the age before artificial intelligence, AI, and ChatGPT over usage of this punctuation.
  • The second paragraph of Page 92 covers great technical depth on the history of brontosaurus, apatosaurus, diplodocus, etc. We get the date of discovery (1876), location (CO, UT, OK) and the name of the discoverer. Crichton is using minutia about known facts to establish the veracity of his science fiction expansion – his writing is loaded with the Star Trek TV Trope of ‘Famous, Famous, Fictional’.
  • When this book came out dinosaurs were undergoing a great revision in perception of how they moved. Previously viewed as cold-blooded, slow, and plodding – they were remade to be quick, speedy, and agile. This franchise was a major driver of that shift in perception.
  • In the movie this scene is not used as the initial introduction to the dinosaurs – that comes in the truck as they drive past the herd of brontosaurs. This scene is used however when the kids wake up while stuck in the tree.

“Over the path, a crude hand-painted sign read: “Welcome to Jurassic Park.” Page 93

  • The branding and in-world creation of a theme park, which is then used as the title of the book is really brilliant.
  • We can’t understate the value of a good title and catchy phrasing – but the usage of the theme park to then be the title of the book is wonderful in it simplicity and persuasion.

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Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Chapter 15 “Isla Nublar” (Pages 87 – 90) – Crichton’s Narnia

In the same way Crichton creates tension by layering tension on top of tension – he creates his origin in Jurassic Park by layering origin on origin on origin. The dinosaurs are born from novel eggs, found from DNA in amber. The characters are assembled. And then we follow them to a ‘magic island‘ – Isla Nublar, which is now as popular a fantasy setting as Brigadoon and Narnia.

Best Writing, Quotes

“Isla Nublar, Hammond explained, was not a true island.”

Page 88 – Crichton introduces his ‘real’ island by immediately stating that it isn’t real

The whole chapter sets the scene – beginning with a foggy entrance by helicopter and closing with our protagonists seeing the long neck of a sauropod emerge from a forest of palm trees. Isla Nublar is a magical place where humanity can invent dinosaurs. Crichton throws his best descriptions at the island as it makes the entire book possible.

The setting accomplishes many things:

  • Closest enough to the US to be a tourist destination.
  • Large natural mountains to serve as a ‘zoo’ and keep the animals in.
  • Close enough to have world class technology, but far enough to be done in total secret.

Page by Page Highlights, Quotes

“With a whine, the rotors began to swing in circles overhead casting shadows on the runway of San Jose airport.” – Page 87

“Isla Nublar, Hammond explained, was not a true island.” Page 88

“Eight miles long and three miles wide at the wides point, in total some twenty-two square miles. Making it the largest private animal preserve in North America.” Page 89

“To the south, rising above the palm trees, Grant saw a single trunk with no leaves at all, just a big curving stump.” Page 90 – Crichton introduces the paleontologist to the dinosaurs with a different ‘reveal’ than what Spielberg did in the movie.

Isla Nublar emerges from the clouds, accessible only by helicopter.

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Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Chapter 14 “Malcolm” (Pages 82 – 87) Ian Malcolm, Chaos Theory & The Butterfly Effect

We first meet Ian Malcolm – the character Jeff Goldblum would make famous – on page 33, where he is quoted as the bridge between chapters. Here we find an entire chapter in his name.

Best Writing, Quotes

“Chaos theory originally grew out of attempts to make computer models of weather in the 1960s.”

Page 85 – Ian explains his field of mathematics to Gennaro from Crichton’s Jurassic Park

In this one chapter, Ian Malcolm introduces two topics common in modern society: Chaos Theory and The Butterfly Effect. This is a disaster movie flashing multiple points of failure in its opening chapters. Biosyn and Dodgson are bribing an IT employee. The animals are dangerous. Even if they weren’t, Malcolm’s mathematics serve as another oracle to tell the reader “Danger Ahead!”

Page by Page Highlights, Quotes

“He struck Grant as being more amused by the outing than anything else.” – Page 82, Grant describes Malcolm/Goldblum’s emotional state – he’s already been described as clad in black, as Goldblum was on screen

“Professional sports, perhaps. Grown men swatting little balls, while the rest of the world pays money to applaud.” – Page 83 Malcolm gives the origin story of his all black out fits and manages to lash out at ‘sportsball‘ as being almost as bad as fashion

“Malcolm shrugged, indifferent to Hammond’s outburst.” Page 84 – He’s unphased by the wealthy owner’s emotions

“Chaos theory originally grew out of attempts to make computer models of weather in the 1960s.” Page 85 – Ian explains his field of mathematics to Gennaro

“The shorthand is the ‘butterfly effect.’ A butterfly flaps its wings in Peking, and weather in New York is different.” Ian Malcolm Page 86 – across these two quotes, has likely been the first character to bring up these terms in what would become mass media

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