Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Deconstructing the Literary Launch of a Franchise – Chapter 8 “Cowan, Swain and Ross” (Pages 57 – 59)

The book’s Introduction is a pseudo-epistle of a legal memo, Chapter 8 brings us back to the lawyer’s office where we hear counsel discuss their client, Ingen and their plans for Jurassic Park. Counsel will be sending an attendee along with the audit that is bringing Alan Grant and Ian Malcolm to the island.

A common author method is to introduce a major character, or major plot point, in a belittling, condescending way. Nedry brings down the park while attempting to steal dinosaur DNA in camouflaged shaving cream cannisters. His faulty designs are at the heart of the chaos that Ian Malcolm predicts will emerge from this effort. His designs are faulty because he’s the low bidder – because his requests for more funding are denied, Ingen drives him to sell their secrets.

Nedry – an obvious anagram for ‘N E R D Y’ – is obviously not a ‘just’ anything. He’s the lynchpin for Crichton’s warnings about technology and the heart of multiple plot mechanisms that lead to the horrors on Isla Nubar. However, neither Crichton nor the movie directors attempt to make him sympathetic – he’s simply a cog in the wheel of a machine, and the readers can immediately tell that this is the cog that will fail.

Best Writing, Quotes:

“Just a technical person: the computer system analyst [Nedry].  Review the park’s computers and fix some bugs.”

Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park, Page 58

Page by Page Highlights:

“We can’t trust Hammond any more.” Gennaro says to Ross.

57

“We’ve got to inspect that island right away.”

58

“Just a technical person: the computer system analyst.  Review the park’s computers and fix some bugs.” Here we meet Nedry, whose actions will doom the park and these visitors.

59

“Perhaps I can even get it delivered to the island while you’re all down there,” Gennaro said.  Gennaro wants to get the Compsognathid specimen from the bite attack away from the risk of public exposure. 

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Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Deconstructing the Literary Launch of a Franchise – Chapter 7 “Skeleton” (Pages 48 – 56)

Chapter 7 is part of ‘Iteration 2’ – the first iteration set the stage, persuading the reader that dinosaurs could really exist. Chapter 6, the first chapter of Iteration 2 introduces us to the team, and now Crichton takes us into the plot. There are dinosaurs because of a shady company, InGen. InGen has a plan to launch a Jurassic Park to show people dinosaurs, and now we’re getting the main characters to the island. While the book is written 22 years before the 2012 release of Marvel’s The Avengers, Crichton is following the trope of, ‘Avengers Assemble’.

Best Writing, Quotes:

“I’ll tell you frankly, Dr. Grant, I’m having a little problem about this island.”

Dr. John Hammond Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park, Page 55

Two pages earlier, Dr. Hammond is telling Grant, ‘hey, you should come check out the island.’ Two years earlier, Hammond is funding Grant’s research. The year earlier, Hammond’s team asks Grant to write a ‘thought piece’ on how to feed a baby dinosaur. Hammond is a corporate sociopath who is manipulating with a method called ‘Trickle Truth’.

The reader knows that a raptor attacked and killed a worker, and that InGen covered up the death. From the Introduction, we know that a fateful ‘two days in Costa Rica’ is coming up for the protagonists.

Writing Exercise – How would an honest Hammond ask for Grant’s help?

“I’m worried about the safety of what we’ve been doing. You’re the closest we’ve got to an ‘expert’ in a field we’ve invented on our own. Will you help us?” Hammond would then need to follow up with a candid report on the deaths, accidents, and systems he’s using at the park.

Page by Page Highlights:

49

“Studies of predatory/prey populations in the game parks of Africa and India suggested that, roughly speaking, there was one predatory carnivore for every four hundred herbivores.”

50

“No three toed lizard has walked on this planet for two hundred million years.” Grant on identifying the Costa Rica dinosaur.

51

“Like the coelacanth?”

52

“Crocodiles are basically Triassic animals living in the present.”

53

“You know, you ought to see it, Dr. Grant.” John Hammond invites Grant to attend. 

54

“It’s a biological specimen, a partial fragment of an animal collected from Central America. A living animal.” Grant is excited about a single animal, while Hammond now becomes worried. 

55

“I’ll tell you frankly, Dr. Grant, I’m having a little problem about this island.” Hammond has trickle truthed Grant about the EPA.

56

“Pack lightly.  You don’t need passports.” Hammond to Grant – as the park is operating far outside the law.  

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Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Deconstructing the Literary Launch of a Franchise – Chapter 6 “Shore of the Inland Sea” (Pages 35 – 48)

Chapter 6 begins ‘Iteration 2’ – the second of seven sections that spans from pages 35 – 93. The first iteration was all setting the stage, this is the first chapter where we meet characters that are not just protagonists in the book, they are also iconic movie characters from the film franchise. Paleontologist Alan Grant, his assistant Ellie Satler, and Jeff Goldblum’s iconic character Ian Malcolm all enter the scene. Malcolm is the source for the quotes on all of the ‘Iteration’ cover pages, and in chapter six he is referenced in the story for the first time – although we don’t yet meet him.

Best Writing, Quotes:

“The modern world was changing fast, and urgent questions about the weather, deforestation, global warming, or the ozone layer often seemed unanswerable, at least in part, with information from the past.”

Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park, Page 35

Crichton’s perspective on the modern world, climate change, and the tension between science, civilization and policy is still developing in Jurassic Park – it comes to the forefront in his later books.

Writing Exercise – Take the quote and make it Active Voice, Present Tense:

“The modern world changes fast; urgent questions about weather, deforestation, global warming, or the ozone layer are unanswerable solely with information from the past.” Is it reasonable to ask how we would have information from the future? I assume Crichton means that civilization needs to see that we can predict what will happen in the future based on the data we have – that the climate models are more predictive than weather models.

Page by Page Highlights:

35

“Alan grant crouched down, his nose barely inches from the ground.”

36

“He stood, a barrel chested, bearded man of forty.”

37

“The modern world was changing fast, and urgent questions about the weather, deforestation, global warming, or the ozone layer often seemed unanswerable, at least in part, with information from the past.”

38

“Grant was amused to see Morris gaping at her.  Ellie was wearing cut-off jeans and a workshirt tied at her midriff.  She was twenty-four and darkly tanned.”

39

“And he took some pains to distance himself in dress and behavior from the Teacup Dinosaur Hunters, even delivering his lectures in jeans and sneakers.”

40

“There’s nothing below the forty-fifth parallel.”  Hammond’s Foundation is focused on finding DNA in frozen remains.

41

“The foundation has spent seventeen million dollars on amber. They now possess the largest privately held stock of this material in the world.”

42

“It was the Xerox of a check issued in March 1984 from InGen Inc., Farallon Road, Palo Alto, California.”

43

“There were paleontologists like me, and a mathematician from Texas named Ian Malcolm, and a couple of ecologists.” – The most iconic character isn’t introduced until Page 43!

44

“They’ve been dead sixty-five million years. You’d think his calls could wait until morning.”

45

“In 1986, Genetic Biosyn Corporation of Cupertino tested bioengineered rabies vaccine on a farm in Chile.” Is this real?

46

“Countries that perceived genetic engineering to be like any other high-tech development, and thus welcomed it to their lands, unaware of the dangers posed.”

47

“Sure. They could feed a baby hadrosaur.” Grant’s answer is preposterous to him, but we’re learning of the existence of Jurassic Park through his eyes.  His sarcasm now balances out his wonder later in the book.

48

“Well, it was something about identifying some remains.” Alice Levin has called about the Costa Rica dinosaur.  The answer is just next to them at all times, raising the stakes and the suspense to the reader.

<Have a near accident about to impact a main character at multiple times.>

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Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: 1st Section, “First Iteration”

Published in 1990, this book launches an entertainment franchise with the 1994 theatrical release of the blockbuster movie. The characters and plot are faithful to the source material. The book is broken down into seven sections, listed as ‘Iterations’. This first iteration, and I include both the introduction and the prologue, consists of 31 of the books 458 pages (~7%).

None of the major characters made famous in the film are introduced. We don’t see the island. Instead we learn that small dinosaurs have escaped the island and attacked a young girl, that other attacks have occurred, that people are trying – and failing – to identify the source of these attacks. Crichton has made a mundane, approachable – because it is small – dinosaur real and made it a threat. He hasn’t hit the reader in the head with a tyrannosaurus in the first scene, nor has he unleashed a pack of velociraptors into a major American city. He’s making the animals real by establishing the wild world of biotechnology and by showing how a company could come to exist that could create such animals. He’s creating realistic dinosaurs with his writing of their smell, their behavior, and referencing animals that the readers know are real.

If the threat is real, then the reader’s tension will be real. If the reader knows that the risk of Jurassic Park is real, and that the characters are walking into a trap, then they will build their own tension as they anticipate the characters learning the truth of the world that they’re already in.

Introduction (link)

The introduction is written almost as an epistle titled, “The InGen Incident” and closes by referencing ‘two days in 1989’. It is a lawyerly short story summary of what the reader is about to experience through the eyes of the participants in those fateful two days on the island that is Jurassic Park. Crichton uses similar methods in other books to pull the reader in and provide context. This method also adds a layer of realism to the encounter – it acts as a primer to introduce the reader to what they’re about to experience. It’s like the set up experienced while walking through a line at a theme park; we are brought into the world, shown artefacts, and may hear or see glimpses of the main characters.

Prologue: The Bite of the Raptor (link)

We’re thrust straight into the world in which Jurassic Park is under construction and a construction worker is attacked by a dinosaur, a raptor. He is flown to a hospital where he dies from his wounds.

Crichton establishes several major rules for the book right away;

  • The dinosaurs are dangerous and not controlled.
  • The island is remote – beyond the oversight of any kind of government, and too far away for anyone to readily get help.
  • The corporate entity overseeing the dinosaurs will behave as any capitalist entity would be expected to behave. Deaths are sad, but don’t merit a full ‘safety stop’, and legal liability is important to minimize even if it requires theft of a camera to remove incriminating evidence.

These are important tenants for the ‘rules’ of the book. Crichton has established that biotech research is unsupervised and similar to the ‘wild west’ in the opening introduction. The dinosaur creators – Hammond and the InGen investors will also exhibit systemic overconfidence in their ability to control nature. Here we see a man die, fearing for his life and calling out monsters. The physicians around him have to go along with the corporate lie of a ‘construction accident’, even as they see that it is false.

Chapter 1: Almost Paradise (Pages 9 – 14)

Jurassic Park wasn’t the success it is because it was the first book to discuss dinosaurs – it was a hit because Crichton made the dinosaurs real and personal. Here we encounter the Bowman’s – a typical couple on vacation with their daughter, complete with travel tension, budget issues, and a hesitancy to ask for directions. And then their daughter is attacked by mysterious ‘lizards’ – which the reader knows are escaped dinosaurs.

The ‘escaped’ nature of the dinosaurs also starts a countdown clock which will be used later in the book as a mechanism to create urgency. The audience knows that somewhat benign dinosaurs escape from Jurassic Park, so this allows real concern that more dangerous and deadly dinosaurs – such as the raptors that killed the park worker in the prologue – must be kept from escaping. Crichton ups the stakes at every point in the book – he injures a child and uses it to show that much worse, much deadlier injuries are also possible should more dinosaurs escape.

Chapter 2: Puntarenas (Pages 16 – 21)

Crichton jams the second chapter with emotion and fear. The Bowmans have rushed their injured daughter to their hospital. They are simultaneously believing her story that she is attacked by lizards, and she is not being believed about the number of toes that the lizards have. If it is three toes – dinosaur, four toes – lizard. The physicians now frame the problem incorrectly – they can’t imagine what could attack her, so they assume that it wasn’t an attack. Rather than wonder what could create such an injury and leave open a sense of wonder, they force uncertainty from their minds.

As they remove a willingness to explore uncertainty their analytical capabilities are decreased. The reader is in suspense because we know the answer is “Dinosaurs!” and yet at every moment where the analytical tool kit imagined by Crichton in 1990 is not allowed to be used in a creative manner which could help them recognize that they’re dealing with biotech built reptilian Frankenstein.

Chapter 3: The Beach (Pages 22 – 24)

Crichton tells the reader that there are many similar bite incidents to the one experienced by the Bowman’s daughter. He describes the behavior of howler monkeys because by looking at the behavior of one unusual animal the reader becomes more open to the behavior of the truly exotic dinosaurs. Just as Crichton uses the TV Trope of ‘Famous, Famous, Fictional’ (TV Tropes Explanation) in the Introduction, he uses the same setup for introducing the dinosaurs; “Lizard/Bird, Exotic Animal, Biotech Dinosaur.”

Chapter 4: New York (Pages 25 – 28)

The chapter ends with Crichton really upping the stakes – we’ve now got a dead baby in a bassinet in Costa Rica from the same bites that sent the young Bowman to the hospital earlier. We’re also watching the tiered escalation of problem solving – the accident report and unknown toxicology arrives at the desk of a researcher in New York. Because he is not confronted with a clear visual of a dinosaur biting a baby, he can’t imagine what the possible source of the problem could be. His diagnostic tools let him get close to the problem, but it isn’t identified with the urgency that the reader knows is needed.

Crichton builds tension in a realistic fashion by showing how real systems would respond to a problem that the reader knows is real. The tension arises between a threat that the reader knows of, that the characters don’t yet recognize.

Chapter 5: The Shape of the Data (Pages 29 – 31)

Each of the seven ‘Iterations’ has a drawing of a fractal and a quote from Ian Malcolm – the iconic character played by Jeff Goldblum in the films – who isn’t even introduced until Chapter 7, and is only first mentioned in Chapter 6. This chapter title refers to the chaotic shape of the emerging data – and it does so by getting even more technical. We read of protein sequencing and witness again another near miss of ‘DINOSAURS!’ when a protein used in synthesis is overlooked as cross contamination. Crichton gives the reader the first satisfaction as one of the experts finally says, “it looks like a dinosaur to me.”

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Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Deconstructing the Literary Launch of a Franchise – Chapter 5 “The Shape of the Data” (Pages 29 – 31)

The book title shouts, “DINOSAURS!” What made it so compelling was the universe Crichton created around the dinosaurs to make their existence seem not just plausible, but inevitable. In this chapter the author delves into proteins, laboratory analytics, cross contamination of samples, and continues to show the reader that his characters keep missing the fact that there is a monster in the neighboring room. The reader knows there will be dinosaurs, and the tension escalates as the characters keep missing out on realizing that there are dinosaurs nearby.

Best Writing, Quotes:

“Because this enzyme was a marker for genetic engineering, and not found in wild animals, technicians assumed it was a lab contaminant and did not report it when they called Dr. Cruz, the referring physician in Puntarenas.”” – Page 29

Jurassic Park, Page 29

This is a monster sentence that fits with Crichton’s theme of overconfidence leading to disaster. It hints at issues that grow in Crichton’s writing that human mistakes are the most dangerous part of science and scientific discovery.

Writing Exercise – Take the quote and make it Active Voice, Present Tense: Lab contamination is a common risk. The enzyme is a common marker for genetic engineering not found in wild animals, and when detected researchers ignore it, assuming its presence to be a result of cross contamination.

Page by Page Highlights:

29

“But among the salivary proteins was a real monster: molecular mass of 1,980,000, one of the largest proteins known.”

“Because this enzyme was a marker for genetic engineering, and not found in wild animals, technicians assumed it was a lab contaminant and did not report it when they called Dr. Cruz, the referring physician in Puntarenas.” 

30

“I don’t know,” she said. “But that looks like a dinosaur to me.”

31

“And whatever it is, it can wait until Dr. Simpson gets back from Borneo to identify it.” – Page 31

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Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Deconstructing the Literary Launch of a Franchise – Chapter 4 “New York” (Pages 25 – 28)

The reader knows there are dinosaurs on an island, and the island is called Jurassic Park. It’s the title of the book. The characters don’t know. Crichton builds tension by letting the reader in as the characters miss many potential opportunities to learn about the dinosaurs but they constantly just barely miss a clue.

Best Writing, Quotes:

“They had run toxicity profiles as well, and they had found only one positive match: the blood was mildly reactive to the venom of the Indian king cobra.” – Page 27

Jurassic Park, Page 27

Writing Exercise – Take the quote and make it Active Voice, Present Tense: Toxicity profiles show only one positive match; the blood reacts to the venom of the Indian king cobra. Had anyone else introduced the idea of dinosaurs having poison prior to Crichton?

Page by Page Highlights:

25

“Dr. Richard Stone, head of the Tropical Diseases Laboratory of Columbia University Medical Center, often remarked that the name conjured up a grander place than it actually was.” – Page 25

26

“While you’re waiting for it to thaw, do an X ray and take Polaroids for the record.” – Page 26

27

“They had run toxicity profiles as well, and they had found only one positive match: the blood was mildly reactive to the venom of the Indian king cobra.” – Page 27

Guitierrez reads a fax from Jones as epistle. 

“On the contrary, he felt his original views were correct: that a lizard species had been driven from the coast into a new habitat, and was coming into contact with village people.” – Page 28

He’s right to be suspicious of the new contacts – but he can’t imagine what is really driving the rash of attack, because it is unimaginable. 

28

“But long before she reached the bassinet, she could see what had happened to the infant’s face, and she knew the child must be dead.”

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Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Deconstructing the Literary Launch of a Franchise – Chapter 3 “The Beach” (Pages 22 – 24)

This is a ‘filler’ chapter as Crichton continues to get the reader pulled into the plot by comparing the dinosaurs to modern animals and using all of the senses. He brings in smell and feel often when talking about dinosaurs, and surrounds them with present day animals, or descriptions of them, to make their consideration more real to the reader.

Best Writing, Quotes:

“Such a new and distinctive pattern led Guitierrez to suspect the presence of a previously unknown species of lizard.” – Page 23

Jurassic Park, Page 23

Writing Exercise – Take the quote and make it Active Voice, Present Tense: Guitierrez suspects a previously unknown species of lizard because of the new and distinctive pattern.

Page by Page Highlights:

Page 22

“No, like all the others,” the medical officer replied, adding that he had heard of other biting incidents: A child in Vasquez, the next village up the coast, had been bitten while sleeping.” – Page 22

Page 23

“Such a new and distinctive pattern led Guitierrez to suspect the presence of a previously unknown species of lizard.” – Page 23

Page 24

“If there was one howler, there would probably be others in the trees overhead, and howlers tended to urinate on intruders.” – Page 24

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Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Deconstructing the Literary Launch of a Franchise – Chapter 2 “Puntarenas” (Pages 16 – 21)

The Bowmans get their daughter to a hospital where her injuries are treated. The readers know it is dinosaurs, but the characters are shown to be rightfully puzzled by events. Over confidence, a common villain in Crichton novels makes an appearance, as Dr. Gutierrez assumes that the girl must have been attacked by a common basilisk, because that is the only potential lizard he knows of that fits her description. Even when Christina Bowman describes that the animal had three toes, not four, he assumes her to be an unreliable narrator.

Calling out the three toes and having the young Bowman compare the tracks in the sand to those of the birds on the beach serves to make the dinosaurs more real. Jurassic Park succeeds as the great novel of dinosaur realism because of these common links that Crichton makes from the extinct dinosaurs to modern living animals.

Best Writing, Quotes:

“Then what could it be?” Dr. Cruz to Dr. Gutierrez.

They’re framing the problem wrong. Because they can’t conceive of something other than a basilisk, they force the answer to be a basilisk. This same issue will come up later in Jurassic Park when the system starts trying to count the number of dinosaurs on the island – a forcing function leads to the wrong answer, because they’ve asked the question the wrong way.

Page by Page:

“Mike would not soon forget the frantic drive back to civilization, the four-wheel drive Land Rover slipping and sliding up the muddy track into the hills, while his daughter screamed in fear and pain, and her arm grew more bloated and red.” Page 16

She’s been attacked by small dinosaurs that are dangerous in a real way that is unexpected to the modern reader. We’re learning that the creatures are real, we’re learning of the dangers the heroes will face when they eventually voyage into Jurassic Park.

“She has drawn it standing on its hind legs…” Page 17 – Dr. Cruz says of the picture drawn by the daughter of her dinosaur assailant. The reader knows its dinosaurs, but the characters do not yet know.

“I am sure this lizard was a Basiliscus amoratus, a striped basilisk lizard found here in Costa Rica and also in Honduras.” says Dr. Gutierrez. Page 18

Over confidence is often the villain in Crichton novels. That is true here and will only grow as the plot thickens.

“And she said there were three toes on the foot.” Ellen tells the ‘expert’ that his hypothesis doesn’t fit. Why wouldn’t her daughter be an accurate narrator? Page 19

“Immediately the analysis of the saliva was halted, even though a preliminary fractionation showed several extremely high molecular weight proteins of unknown biological activity.” Page 20

As in many Crichton novels, an automated process is halted because of human error. This was common in Andromeda Strain and will also cost lives through the rest of this book.

“She held up her hand, middle three fingers spread wide. “And the lizard made those kind of marks in the sand, too.” Christina Bowman to her mother, Page 21.

“Then what could it be?” Dr. Cruz to Dr. Gutierrez.

They’re framing the problem wrong. Because they can’t conceive of something other than a basilisk, they force the answer to be a basilisk. This same issue will come up later in Jurassic Park when the system starts trying to count the number of dinosaurs on the island – a forcing function leads to the wrong answer, because they’ve asked the question the wrong way.

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Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Deconstructing the Literary Launch of a Franchise – Chapter 1 “Almost Paradise” (Pages 9 – 14)

The book is divided into seven sections, each labeled as ‘Iterations’. This chapter begins “First Iteration.” Crichton leads up to the theme park, to Jurassic Park by creating multiple stakes. Here the stakes that he’s establishing is that the dinosaurs will escape. Then we get to the park, the stakes are, “can our heroes survive?” Their stakes are preventing more dinosaurs from escaping to the mainland, and in these first two chapters we see the dangers of that not happening.

Best Writing, Quotes:

“Tina was looking idly at the tracks when she hard a chirping, followed by a rustling in the mangrove thicket.”

Jurassic Park, Page 14

Active Voice: Tina looks at the tracks and hears chirping, then a rustling in the mangrove thicket.

Page by Page Highlights:

“At the earliest drawings of the fractal curve, few clues to the underlying mathematical structure will be seen.” – Ian Malcolm, Page 9

“Of course they’d had a huge fight.” Page 11

Crichton is using the actions of the visitors to Costa Rica to pull the reader in, to have them see the world of Jurassic Park through their eyes. By doing so, this ups the stakes later on in the book when the tension gets real with the dinosaurs.

“Suddenly, a small black shape flashed across the road and Tina shrieked, “Look! Look!” Page 12

First siting of a dinosaur in the book by a child with parents on a vacation.

“What about snakes?” Ellen Bowman, Page 13

Crichton again brings up reptilian imagery to ramp up the disgust, tension and realism of the dinosaurs.

“Tina was looking idly at the tracks when she hard a chirping, followed by a rustling in the mangrove thicket.” Page 14

The author uses all five senses to make the dinosaurs real – and he does so in ways that were atypical for dinosaurs at the time. Crichton is going to sacrifice a child early in the book to show that the bad guys – InGen – have been negligent in their introduction of the bad guys they created – the dinosaurs.

“Then, from down the beach, carried by the wind, they heard their daughter’s voice. She was screaming.” Page 15

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Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park: Deconstructing the Literary Launch of a Franchise – “Prologue: The Bite of the Raptor”

There are two introductory ‘chapters’ to Jurassic Park, with the first being the forementioned pseudo-epistle that brings the reader into the world with a salting of truth. Crichton wants the readers’ experience to be realistic, he doesn’t want a book of magical realism and fantasy. This is why in a time of dinosaur-mania, Jurassic Park became the dominant brand. The first introductory chapter was numbered with roman numerals, we are now reading modern hindu-arabic numbers.

How big is the Jurassic Park media franchise? In this chapter a physician has to look up the word ‘raptor’ – something which seems totally implausible 30 years later because this book series so popularized the term.

Best Quotes, Best Writing

“And the wound had a strange odor, a kind of rotten stench, a smell of death and decay. She had never smelled anything like it before.” Page 4

This is the most significant passage because smell becomes a big part of how Crichton makes his dinosaurs more real – something that was carried over into the film universe.

Page-by-Page, Chapter by Chapter

“The tropical rain fell in drenching sheets, hammering the corrugated roof of the clinic building, roaring down the metal gutters, splashing on the ground in a torrent.” Page 1

“Bobbie could imagine it – one of those huge American resorts with swimming pools and tennis courts, where guests could play and drink their daiquiris, without having any contact with the real life of the country.” Page 2

Dr. Roberta “Bobbie” Carter imagines the future efforts of InGen when their two year project is completed. She’s set the perfect ideal, the reader will spend the next 456 pages living a nightmare in this ‘resort’ brought on by science.

“Because it almost looks as if he was mauled,” Bobbie Carter said, probing the wound. Page 3

The word ‘Raptor’ is only used in the chapter title. There’s important information never mentioned in the text of the book. The word ‘Raptor’ has not yet appeared. Crichton gives a character that immediately can smell something is fishy. We see the corporate representative of InGen immediately appearing shifty, insisting it was a backhoe accident, when the reader knows this is not the case – not because of what the characters can observe, but because of the reader’s awareness of the chapter title. Crichton doesn’t have to give any back story, he doesn’t have to give Ed Regis any kind of self-awareness or self reflection because of the five words he’s used to name the chapter, “the bite of the raptor.”

“And the wound had a strange odor, a kind of rotten stench, a smell of death and decay. She had never smelled anything like it before.” Page 4

Dr. Carter is inspecting the wound, which presents as unusual. The smell is another layer of ‘unusual’ and is used by Crichton throughout to describe the dinosaurs. He puts them in scenarios where they are pooping and feeding. This was a common trope in the movie as well. Crichton is using the feeling to make the creatures real.

“It means hupia.” Page 5

The wounded worker whispers the word ‘Raptor’ – which is interpreted to a local creature of myth by Manuel.

“Bobbie was even grabbing for a stick to put in the boy’s clenched jaws, but even as she did it she knew it was hopeless, and with a final spastic jerk he relaxed and lay still.” Page 6

“But when she turned back to the table, she saw that her camera was gone.” Page 7

InGen has removed the body and evidence of the body. InGen is the super-antagonist in the book, who produces the antagonist that goes on the killing spree. Is InGen a bad actor or simply incompetent? Crichton begins with an example of Hanlon’s razor.

“Raptor \ n [deriv. of L raptor plunderer, fr. raptus]: bird of prey.” Page 8

Throughout the book, Crichton compares the dinosaur movements to that of a bird, here he does it with a formal definition as Dr. Carter looks to a dictionary to understand what a raptor is. How big is Jurassic Park? In this chapter a physician has to look up the word ‘raptor’ – something which seems totally implausible 30 years later because this book series so popularized the term.

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